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Johann Peters's avatar

I’m going to hit this systematically...

Is this a good way to start an AAP book?

Yes as a kid that remembers the end tail-end of the sixties and beyond the “You are here” iconic poster resonates. Elaborating from there are on a cost/benefit analysis approach is a very good start. We all have skin in the game of existence don’t we?

On a further note I think the sensing of red and green analogy would be better if you harkened back to the red/blue colors from the Matrix pill analogy (at least the colors not the meaning). The reason the Mandalorian did so well (I heard Star Wars isn’t your thing) was all the throwbacks that go back to the earliest films greatest hits. All your books are relevant collectively to summarizing your personal dharma. We are not getting younger everyday but don’t look at this as a complete bookend but more a spiritual-based movement.

Does it get and hold your attention?

Absolutely. I think you are pointing out the milestones in evolution. Whether early man using a club as a tool for dominance in 2001: A Space Oddessy or the stages of human development like the futurist Toffler stated that the agricultural age, Industrial Age and information/technology age are highly relevant. Listing a 1-2-3 approach is pretty effective.

If not, what might be a better way to start the book?

I don’t question my ability to get through a book especially when written by you. I do question the ability of a younger audience unless spiritually seeking to have the attention span. I’m not exactly sure how to be hip in the third quarter of life. But throwbacks of the era of the sixties and seventies which you were about 13 years old seems to resound to the younger crowd. Perhaps frame things from the wisdom of cultural change in the sixties because it is relevant to changes in today’s world. I’m guessing that living in that era can make you a wise sage.

What parts of this didn’t you like/understand?

I didn’t think it was an awful first attempt. I’d resist the urge to assume that any first attempt should go into the dustbin.

What parts do you think were missing?

For an opening chapter I think it covered the bases on how you see the world. Your job is to go deeper into the concepts and as I said be a futurist. This one of the reasons I have a deep passion for Blade Runner with its dystopian vision of the world. It has elements of an exhausted eco-system and healthy people leaving in mass exodus.

And (especially if you basically like it as a way to start a book) what would you want the next chapter to be about?

I think you might consider the next chapter to be about the current state of affairs. Where we have arrived to a decision fork in the crossroads. There is a point perhaps later but not in the next chapter but midway where you may have to put on a futurist perspective to relay both an envisioned good or bad scenario moving forward. How will the future world look? Will it be utopian or an Idiocracy? How does industry look to resolve a greedy capitalist society versus sharing in success?

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Amjad Atallah's avatar

The first pages of a book need to grab me to shake me out of my inertia. This created enough interest that I would buy your book. But then again, I probably would have anyway ... I definitely like the potential promise of a less un-enlightened life!

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